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Originally Posted by LeftCoaster
Well if you're going to get pedantic on me, the context in which you used appears, then contrast that with your opinion that it is in fact a disservice to the building does not say that.
What your sentence structure actually said was that that it appears as though it was done as a benefit for the Marine Building when its in fact detrimental, not that it appears as though it was done for the sake of the building and was actually an economic decision. Your use of the conjunction "but" refers the subject of the sentence in which it was used to the previous sentence, thereby tying the second sentence to the first. Your economic comment came in a subsequent note and does is not referenced in the previous paragraph, so yes in fact as you phrased it those two statements were contradictory. Whether you intended for that I can't pretend to know, but from a grammatical standpoint that's how it reads.
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I think a lack of attention to context is causing you to overcomplicate what should be very simple. My comment (as opposed to the note appended to it) was a response to a
hypothetical scenario. It was clearly directed at those who argue that the MNP Tower's modest height is for the best--
even in the hypothetical absence of any economic or legal limits--because it allegedly shows the proper respect for and/or has the most harmonious relationship with the historically important Marine Building. I explicitly quoted this argument in the very preface to my comment. Thus, every sentence in my comment is to be read as a response to the argument that the MNP Tower's current height is still the best even in the hypothetical absence of any economic or legal limits. Hypothetically, therefore, if the MNP Tower had been limited to its current height for the reasons that the people I was directly responding to advocate, then we would indeed be constraining the future for the sake of the past, and I laid out reasons why such an approach/philosophy would be a disservice to both buildings.
By then pointing out that the
actual constraints on the MNP Tower's height were in fact economic, not aesthetic, the appended note was designed precisely to underscore the hypothetical nature of the analysis in the preceding comment. Claiming there is a contradiction between a hypothetical analysis and an appended note
confirming the hypothetical nature of that analysis is nonsensical.