Klamoha city

[doncarnage]

Hi. this is my city. I'm kinda new... (Not kinda) so basicaly, it's sux. i know. Just want to show you my 2 building city and maybe you can give me help or idea? thanks!

(Don't be rude, i know it's ugly^^)

[Austin55]

Hard to crituque with so few buildings, you need lots of em before you can improve. go build some more, take a quick look through the diagrams (NY and chicago, mostly) and try things other than boxes. you also need less bright colors.

Itll turn out great!

[Skyscraper100]

keep it up, youll be better soon if you keep workin

[doncarnage]

i follow austin55's post and this is what i have done. They're no texture exept for the front base.

[Skyscraper100]

they look good

[Patrick]

Don't put yourself down, this is a great start!

[Aleks]

Looks good! Just tone down on the colors. Other than that it's a pretty good start.

[doncarnage]

Here are a totaly new building and the last building get texturized.

I also repaint every little window (That kind of long and boring ) To remove the trasparency. (It's way better without it)

[Skyscraper100]

the twisted tower looks nice
good work

[Patrick]

Wow amazing! I would never have the effort to do a twisting tower like that!

[doncarnage]

Thanks! never thought i would do such tower 2 day after starting posting here