A bit odd that it's all the way down on P4, which means that the retail workers would have deeper access into the building, but I guess it's next to the biggest bike room.
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For the loading facilities, it would be nice if a double-sided elevator could be installed to allow move-ins from the loading bay. The condo I rented in Toronto during university had that arrangement which prevents the security problems of move-ins through the front door.
The orange line could allow for a short dock. You'd have to add stairs down to grade to the side.