My mockup on a few tweaks I think would make the building better (and all I have to work with on my office PC is MS Paint...).
Main changes:
1. Segment the west-facing facades each into two vertical "faces," which are at different angles (they can be innies our outies, just not flat). You can offset the roof of the next section to accommodate this.
2. Slope the roofs (another nod to Penny Lane). Changes the profile and makes the lighting more dynamic.
3. Simplify the first few storeys and "raise" the tower off the ground. Makes the ground level feel more open and airy and gives the tower 3 distinct sections (base, body, crown).
4. Increase the height.
I think these are all things which can be achieved without making any changes to the floor layouts, and would significantly elevate the stature of this tower.
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Originally Posted by Deepstar
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