Need help reviewing my architecture portfolio

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I posted this in another forum (archinect.com) but it seems that I'm not getting any responses. So I'm thinking on posting the same thread here.

http://www.mediafire.com/?lte676ae4uf6g23

(It's only 19.6 mb, it only takes 2 mins of download) - I don't know if it's appropriate to post download links in this forum. If there are other ways to show my portfolio in a proper way, please tell.


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This is the portfolio I submitted to architecture school, but to my dismay, it was rejected by 6 professors and was given a grade of 1, out of 5. I was not admitted into the school for this reason; I really want to know what were the reasons my portfolio was ranked so low. At the end, the school never told me what I did wrong... but it's understandable.


Can someone here please review my portfolio and tell me what it lacks, what I did wrong, or what I have to emphasize more? Tell me if it’s the photography, the font I used, the colors, or the way I arrange things… Perhaps I’m doing something that I’m not supposed to do, and/or, there are things that I need to work more on… whatever it is, please tell me what I need in order to improve, your help it’s going to be much appreciated.


There are only 17 pages, nothing more. They are numbered in order for you to see the flow (or at least the flow I was trying to achieve).

If you have ideas that you might want to share with me, in order to improve and have a more coherent portfolio, then please, do share them.

Thanks in advanced.


Here, if you can't download them:

http://issuu.com/winterfrontkendall/...-introduction-

http://issuu.com/winterfrontkendall/docs/1

http://issuu.com/winterfrontkendall/docs/2

http://issuu.com/winterfrontkendall/docs/3

http://issuu.com/winterfrontkendall/docs/4

http://issuu.com/winterfrontkendall/docs/5

http://issuu.com/winterfrontkendall/docs/6

http://issuu.com/winterfrontkendall/docs/7

http://issuu.com/winterfrontkendall/docs/8

http://issuu.com/winterfrontkendall/docs/9

http://issuu.com/winterfrontkendall/docs/10

http://issuu.com/winterfrontkendall/docs/11

12 ) http://i738.photobucket.com/albums/x...ERFRONT/12.jpg

http://issuu.com/winterfrontkendall/docs/13

http://issuu.com/winterfrontkendall/docs/14

http://issuu.com/winterfrontkendall/docs/15

http://issuu.com/winterfrontkendall/docs/16

http://issuu.com/winterfrontkendall/docs/17