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Old Posted Jul 12, 2013, 11:59 PM
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Originally Posted by glowrock View Post
Here's one of mine I could use some suggestions on:

Its a bit overexposed, he looks very pale. Colors could use a bit of a punch to be more vibrant. There is a bit of fro in the corner. You chopped off one of his hands too. Try not to clip people at appendages, it just looks odd.

But what throws this off the most is the open mouth dumb look he has. Not really showing dude in his best light.

This is an example of a similar shot that is framed just a bit better.

Pirate with Sword by DiskoJoe, on Flickr

See how I cut in between the wrist and the elbow?
This could have been better though had I centered him more.
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