Klamoha city
 

Hi. this is my city. I'm kinda new... (Not kinda) so basicaly, it's sux. i know. Just want to show you my 2 building city and maybe you can give me help or idea? thanks!

(Don't be rude, i know it's ugly^^)

http://i234.photobucket.com/albums/e...Schriville.jpg

Hard to crituque with so few buildings, you need lots of em before you can improve. go build some more, take a quick look through the diagrams (NY and chicago, mostly) and try things other than boxes. you also need less bright colors.

Itll turn out great!

keep it up, youll be better soon if you keep workin

i follow austin55's post and this is what i have done. They're no texture exept for the front base.

http://i234.photobucket.com/albums/e...ewbuilding.jpg
http://i234.photobucket.com/albums/e...ik12/new-1.jpg

they look good :)

Don't put yourself down, this is a great start!

Looks good! Just tone down on the colors. Other than that it's a pretty good start.

Here are a totaly new building and the last building get texturized.

I also repaint every little window (That kind of long and boring :haha: ) To remove the trasparency. (It's way better without it)

http://i234.photobucket.com/albums/e...2/klahom2a.jpg
http://i234.photobucket.com/albums/e...12/klahoma.jpg

the twisted tower looks nice
good work

Wow amazing! I would never have the effort to do a twisting tower like that!

Thanks! never thought i would do such tower 2 day after starting posting here :cheers: