I actually like the writing. Sure, it's kitschy, and may not hold up over time, but it's different, and draws attention to the structure and the architecture.
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"Then each time Fleetwood would be not so much overcome by remorse as bedazzled at having been shown the secret backlands of wealth, and how sooner or later it depended on some act of murder, seldom limited to once."
Against the Day, Thomas Pynchon
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